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Loki (Thor 2011) Pregunta

How's this sound? *spoilers*

Ok, so my English teacher just set the BEST creative escritura piece ever!!!! I have to continue the end of a film, which is basically fan fiction, right?

My chosen film is Thor: The Dark World. I haven't finished o handed this in yet, but I'd like to know what people think. It's in Loki's perspective, so don't judge me too harshly.



As I watched my dear brother leave the room, I revealed the illusion that hid my face. I rose from the trono I had so deeply desired for as long as I could remember, and made my way to the darkest part of my long forgotten home. The dungeons were a vile and vicious place, so vile it was hard to believe I had once resided there. As I passed by, each criminal in every cell stood to greet their king. Except one. I turned to face the vermin in the cell, and recognised his face instantly. He was tall and handsome, yet dark and mysterious.

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It was me (Last sentence, forgot to add it, sorry)
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Loki (Thor 2011) Respuestas

ITF said:
I like it. If tu write más let me know as I would amor to read it.
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Thx, I'll post an articulo with the finished story as soon as I can :)
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Ninjagirl88 said:
What the....beautifulness!!!!!!!!!! That was the best thing I've ever read!!!
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Wow, thanks ^_^
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BertinDoutnik said:
wow - this is cool. I can really imagine loki doing so.
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thx, I tried to make it sound like something Loki would do :)
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wanderingchild7 said:
Amazing! Do tu want to continue the story?
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