Renesmee & Jacob

Chapter 10: Imprint.
There was no sound around her, except for quiet breathing. Renesmee felt groggy and disoriented, and she wasn’t sure where she was. Her arm seared with pain.
“She’s awake,” Someone murmured. Renesmee recognized the voice of her father. So she was home. Slowly Renesmee opened her eyes, letting them adjust quickly to the bright white light. The first face she saw was her mother’s, her golden eyes filled with concern.
“Renesmee, baby, are tu ok?” she whispered, her beautiful voice breaking the tense silence in the room. Renesmee was laying on one of the white...

Sorry I haven't written for so long i just had alot of homework

Jacob pov
I was running now as fast as I could.I could hear Nahuel saying something like "i want you"which just made me even angryer.when I I got there I couldnt think all I want to do was kick his culo and then when I saw renesmee face she look scared and shock.she hadn't heard of saw me yet so I just stood there.but por the look of it Nahuel did he briefly look over at me and gave me and evils smile. A smile I didn't like and that kindof scared me.then his arm went around renesmee waisted and his hand moved to her butt then he...

Chapter 8: Difficulties.
Renesmee looked over to see Emma hand in hand with Seth. He was smiling brightly at her as she leaned into his side. The last guest dwindled out and Alice shut the door, bouncing up and down. Renesmee leaned into Jacob, exhausted. She put her hand on his cheek.
“Me too Ness. I’m tired just like tu but I don’t think there through with tu yet” he murmured. Renesmee stretched up on her toes and wrapped her arms around him. He kissed her quietly for a moment, the heat of his lips penetrating her skin.
“Will tu two cut it out?” Her dad snapped irritably from...

this is chapter three. like it says in the title. Im re editing my entire story and this is the edited version, Hope tu like it. Send me a prop. tell me if tu like it and how i could change it.

“Renesmee what’s wrong?” Samantha asked.
“Jacob.” I dicho with a hiss.
“Who is Jacob?” Chris asked with a smirk.
“Not who tu think he is Chris.” I dicho annoyed.
“He has been a friend of my mo… aunt for years he is closer to my age though. My boyfriend goes to school on the reservation.”
“Then why do tu look so distressed Renesmee?” Samantha asked worriedly.
“he never finished...