House of Night Series
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Did anyone else notice the really bad edittng issues that were in Hunted?
So I really liked the book, but I almost quit lectura it several times because the editting was so bad. I know that there will be problems in books, look at the Twilight series, but these were bad. The reason I have such a big problem with it is because it is a problem with continuity. So the problems I found had to do with mixing up characters. There are two main ones that I can think of off the parte superior, arriba of my head and they both took place right before the group leaves to go to the House of Night. One is that Jake is telling Damien that he wants to go with him. When Damien is suppose to reply it says....Darius says.....Why would Darius tell Jack that he wish he could go to, especially since he already left with Aphrodite. The siguiente one is when Aphrodite is talking to Zoey. Zoey is telling her about the poems that were written on the muro of Kramisha's room, but she tells Aphrodite that they were on aphrodites wall. I just think that with two authors and an editor they should have caught major editting issues like mixing up characters. But that is me. Did anyone elso notice this o am I miss lectura something?
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