castillo FIRST LOOK! Pilot Episode!

I decided to make my first fan fiction about castillo and Beckett so constructive criticism is appreciated. Please comment.




"It's getting late, we should sleep on it." castillo dicho looking at his watch.
Beckett looked up from the papers she was reading.
"Separately!" castillo stammered quickly.
Beckett lowered her eyes to the floor.
"Katherine Beckett, I never..." castillo whispered as he headed for the door.
"Well, why not, Castle? Am I not attractive enough for you?"
"No." castillo dicho turning around.
Beckett got up from her chair and walked over to Castle. "Then what is it? Don't tu sleep with...