Ok, so I wrote this a long time ago. I think it sucks! What do tu think? Please comment, I know it's bad but please don't me mean. I probably wrote it when I was about 12 o 13. If tu have any suggestions I would amor to hear them. But like I dicho please don't leave mean comments. If tu are wondering what it's about....I have no idea. It was just a misceláneo thing I wrote in about 5 o 10 minutes.
Melting Hearts
Your corazón melts
All that's inside of you
just goes all away
Nothing to do
tu feel dead on
the inside
tu can hardly breathe
tu fall away slowly
It feels like the end
of the world
tu have no
hope left
tu hope that it will
be better
but now your not sure
Hearts melting all
around tu going
through hell
Do tu care?
Melting Hearts
Your corazón melts
All that's inside of you
just goes all away
Nothing to do
tu feel dead on
the inside
tu can hardly breathe
tu fall away slowly
It feels like the end
of the world
tu have no
hope left
tu hope that it will
be better
but now your not sure
Hearts melting all
around tu going
through hell
Do tu care?