Okay. So I got a anouther.

Detrimenal Reasons, por Lightening Phoenix.

He mentions that he feels he may not have enough reviews..

But.. Dude.. Are tu friggin kidding me.

I would fucken kill some someone that many reviews..

The most I ever got in my entire time of Fanfiction.. Is 57 reviews.

But then again.

I never made such a long culo story, lol..

Seriously though.

I thought I made it clear how I feel about overly long stories, and not always having the attention span for it.

Anything over 30 o 40 thousand words, will usually freak me out, XD.

But.. I already made the promise of lectura it.

Soooo.. Onto...

It was a butieful día in jasper but runt was upset''why are tu so down buddy'' dicho Garth ''I miss uncle Rocko he has been gone for weeks'' Garth understood that that were very close ''he should be here tomorrow'' dicho Garth ''and he's going to rest at grandpa Winston's den'' runt knew Rocko's guarida, den was to far out por the lake half a mile away''maby tu can ask to stay the night'' Garth said''ok I'll see tu later uncle Garth'' dicho runt running home
Back with Kate
''Hay mom can I stay at grandpa's tonight'' exclaimed runt ''sure Rocko will be there I'm sure tu want to see him after his big hunting...

Hutch, Kate, the pups, Cando, Lee, Daryl, and Humphrey are the only few surviving, but might also lose Humphrey with possibly a infected bit ankle, Hutch and the rest were walking with three different lobos heading to where the lobos came from.
Hutch was in front of the group talking to the leader o in this case the higher rank of the group, the pups were lying on Kate's back still scared and sad from what happened back at the Wall-Mart and Kate was walking right behind Hutch, the rest were talking to the other two lobos who was carrying Humphrey who couldn't walk from the pain from his...

I'm sorry about the disppointment this may cause some people.
But this is the first time I have a GOOD review.

Witch means.

Less chances of one of my angry rants.
But that dosent meant I won't swear in this one, if I feel the need.

Anyway.

On to the story.

Now.
The idea for something like this is very much a great one.
And I am very much glad some one did it.

Lilly has always been. What can we say.
A 'noticable'.
Not only is she the only omega of her family.
But she is literary the only white lobo of the whole pack (unless I missed some).

The thought that Winston and Eve aren't her real parents.
It actually...